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"All right, let's get down to business." Ludwig, the personification of Germany demanded.

"Ve! Pasta!" The small Italian shouted from beside you, causing you to laugh. You and Feli the personification of Italy both earned a cold glare from the German.

"Mein gott! Ve need to defeat the Allies!" The German yelled.

"I agree with Mr. Germany." Kiku who happened to be the personification of Japan stated.

"Lighten up Ludwig, they haven't attacked yet. Why must you always make the first move?" You asked crossing your arms over your uniform clad body.

"I don't know vhy I even allowed you in. I need man power, not girl power." The German said coming face to face with you.

"I am just as good as you could ever be!" You stated.

"You und Feli are the saddest soldiers I have ever seen. But by the end of today, you'll be a true soldier." Ludwig declared. "Now, three laps everyone. Let's go!"

You groaned as you trudge your way over to the race track and began to stretch. Ludwig had already began to ran the mile long track, Kiku close behind him. Italy was instead chasing after a little grey kitten that wandered on to a nearby field. You laughed at the sight of the Italian, sure he might have not been the strongest or anything. But Ludwig seriously needed to lighten up.

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After the gruelling hours of running laps and doing push ups. Ludwig was now making you all do some kind of balance training. To some it would look like yoga, Hell it was yoga. Except when Ludwig does it, then it's some kind of 'balance training.'

"You must be tranquil as a forest but on fire within." He stated as he put his leg on his calf and bringing his hands down in a prayer position in front of him. "Once you find yer centre, you're sure zo win." He smiled. For a guy strong guy like him, he sure has good balance. You tried to copy his moves but ended up losing your balance and falling on top of Ludwig who had stood beside you.

"S-Sorry Ludwig." You blushed as you climbed off the blond man.

"Ist's fine frau." He sighed angrily as he got up himself. He turned to face you giving you a harsh glare. "You're a pathetic excuse for a soldier." He sneered. "Some how I'll make a soldier out of you." He spat causing you to flinch from his words.

"I am just as good as you." You retorted.

"Kein vay in Hell." He stated walking away from you.

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After some more gruelling hours of training, Ludwig made you and Feli do more laps since you both weren't up to par with what he wanted in a soldier.

"I am-a never, going to-a catch my breath." Feli panted as he trudge along the mile track. "I-a hope, we don't-a meet Russia. He-a scares me!"

"If you do, say good bye to those who knew you." You laughed, which caused Feli to immediately pale and stare at you with wide eyes. "I really should've taken P.E." You complained grabbing your side to try and sooth the cramp you have gotten from running.

"You know-a ____. Ludwig isn't-a always this-a mean. He-a usually is really nice!" Feli smiled as he jogged beside you.

"Ever since I've joined the Axis, he's been really dealing out these training rituals." You grumbled.

Yet I've still somehow fallen for him, you smiled to yourself. Hopefully he won't see through my facade.

"Come on! Time for some training in the vater!" You heard Ludwig yell in the distance.

"I really-a wish, I knew how to-a swim!" Feli cried as he ran towards Ludwig's voice.

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"Come on _____! Sei ein Mann!" Ludwig yelled at you as you tried to swing a punch at him.

"How the Hell are you so swift?" You panted barely dodging a blow.

"Four rules to becoming a vell trained soldier. One be swift. Two have force like a great typhoon. three fight with all the strength of a raging fire. Four be mysterious." He smirked.

"Well I got one of them down." You smiled.

"Really vat one?" Ludwig asked letting his guard down giving you an opportunity to kick him in the side.

"I'll let you figure which one." You laughed, as you turned around and walked away from Ludwig.
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"Time is racing zowards us till the Allies attack!" Ludwig yelled, you, Feli and Kiku were now lined up in a straight line in front of him.

"How do you even know they'll attack first?" You asked.

"Russia scares-a me!" Feli cried as he ran and hugged Ludwig's leg.

"Get off me!" Ludwig yelled as he tried to shake Feli off his leg. "____? May I speak vith you for a moment?"

"Uh sure." You replied as you walked over to Ludwig who had finally shaken Feli off his leg.

"I vant you to pack yer things and leave." He stated trying to avoid eye contact.

"What? Why?" You questioned.

"You aren't suited for this var." He stated.

"Yes I am! I am just as good as you!" You defended.

"Nein, you aren't. You know that you could never go against the Allies. Stop zrying to prove yerself." He demanded. "I could never make a soldier out of you!"

"Fine, suit yourself." You stated as you walked away, you brushed past the shocked expressions of both Kiku and Feli and grabbed your things from the bunkers. You took one last glance at the field were you saw the boys training.

Bye Ludwig you stated sadly.

You started to walk away, you didn't know where you were heading but you continued walking anyway. With every minute you walked farther away from camp, farther away from the safety and farther away from Ludwig.

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A branch snapping awoke you from your sleep. You had found a tree with a long enough branch to sleep on that night. You heard whispering below and looked over to see both France and England quietly fighting with each other. You were frozen for a bit unsure of what to do in this situation. You heard their hushed plans from above to attack Ludwig and the rest at the break of dawn.

"You bloody git! Hush up their camp could be anywhere around here!" The English man snapped at the Frenchman, you quietly jumped down from the tree and grabbed a nearby branch that had fallen.

"Sh, did you hear zat?" The Frenchman hushed.

"No you wanker, now c'mon let's go find the other." The Brit stated.

"Not so fast!" You stated holding the stick.

"Didn't Ludwig kick you out of the Axis?" England asked surprised to see you.

"Yes he did, but you see I was trained by the best. I as well learned the four things to become a well trained soldier." You smirked.

"I am not fighting la fille!" France protested, giving you the perfect opportunity to swiftly kick him in the side.

"If you just go away, I can promise you that Ludwig will not attack." You stated, you then noticed a large figure moving closer to were you where.

"Leave her alone da?" Said the Russian voice.

"She knows the plan!" France cried.

"We can just take her back to my place then." Russia stated.

"Uh, I. Um, no thanks I am going to be leaving now." You stuttered, you have never been trained for a situation like this. Especially not with the big nation of Russia.

"Not so fast, love." England said as he clamped a hand down on your shoulder. You tried squirming out of his grasp kicking and yelling for help.

"Let her go." A deep voice said. You whipped your head up to see Ludwig standing there with Feli clutching on to him. "Vould you let go!" He snapped at Feli.

The Allies were stunned for a moment, you took this opportunity to your advantage. You grabbed Arthur's hand and swung him off you and into the tall Russian knocking them both to the ground.

"Let's go! Let's go! Let's go!" You ushered as you grabbed Ludwig's hand and dragged him along as you ran away from the three Allies. Feli ran behind you guys crying for you not to leave him alone. You finally made it back to your old base camp panting. You noticed your hand was still tightly in Ludwig's. You felt a hot blush crawl onto your cheeks as you let go of his hand.

"You're an idiot frau." Ludwig said in between pants.

"You're the one who told me to go home! I can't help that I just so happened to run into them!" You retorted.

"Vell you didn't have to fight them!" He yelled.

"They were going to attack you at dawn! I couldn't let them do that." You confessed, Ludwig just sighed in frustration. "Why did you tell me to go home? You saw what I did back there! I was so bad-ass!"

"I told you to go home, because I didn't vant you to get hurt." He admitted. "I understand that you're a very good fighter."

"If you knew I could've handled myself! Why were you so worried that I could've gotten hurt?" You demanded.

"Ich liebe dich." Ludwig stated, a rosy blush appearing on his cheeks.

"I love you too Ludwig." You confessed hugging him tightly, his arms snaked around returning the hug. He tilted your chin up and planted a soft kiss on your lips. You smiled and began to run your hands through his blond hair.

"Germany! Germany! I have-a bruise!" You heard Feli cry, causing Ludwig to groan.

"Sei ein Mann, Feli. Sei ein Mann." Ludwig laughed as he planted another kiss on your lips.
Fourth in my Disney Hetalia series. I do not Hetalia or it's characters. I do not own Disney or the videos. I do not own you, you belong to Ludwig. I also do not own the preview picture. I do own the plot however.

I'll Make A Man Out of You-

German: [link]

English: [link]

Other Stories-

America: Coming Soon!
Australia: [link]
Austria: [link]
Canada: [link]
China: Coming Soon!
Denmark: [link]
England: [link]
Finland: [link]
France: Coming Soon!
Germany: You Are Here!
Greece: Coming Soon!
Iceland: [link]
Italy: [link]
Japan: Coming Soon!
Norway: [link]
Prussia: [link]
Romania: Coming Soon!
Romano: [link]
Russia: [link]
Scotland: [link]
Sealand: [link]
Spain: [link]
Sweden: Coming Soon!
Bad Touch Trio: [link]
F.A.C.E: [link]
Magic Trio: [link]
Nordics: Coming Soon!
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:iconvilabeth:
Vilabeth Featured By Owner Edited Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Read the title and started to hum the song then saw the first line "let's get down to business!" And I lost it. I had to sing the song because of this!


WAS I THE ONLY ONE SINGING!!!
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clobak Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Russia:We can just take her back to my place then.
Me: HELL. YES. *hugs Russia* Let's go.
Russia: ....
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warriorgirl33 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
true, I have barely any power. but im small and I learn to use that to my advantage. im also good with a bow and a sword(sword+ballet work well together fyi
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Hetalian-Canada Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Am I the only one singing along to this?
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:iconwarriorgirl33:
warriorgirl33 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I did too
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:iconmichelthekiler2:
michelthekiler2 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  New member Student Digital Artist
me three XD
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DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Edited Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I CAN BEAT UP ANYONE OR ANYTHING (Even though I was raised by Canada).
I AM A KUNOICHI AND A JUTSU ARTIST!!! SO HERE COMES CALISTROPHIA!!!
Was anyone singing the song while reading? I was...:)
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AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
OH HELL NAW I AM TWICE THE MAN POWER YOU HAVE!! YOU ARE THE FRAU!! I WAS RAISED BY ENGLAND, AND AMERICA!! NARNIA(Me) CAN DEFEAT YOU ANY DAY!!
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Hoppopotamus Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
these are good, you still making them?
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:iconcrazyhetalialover13:
CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Calm as a forest? But what if the forest was on fire?
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014   General Artist
(Germany) I need man power, not girl power.

(Me/Vietnam) AWWWW HEEEEELL NO! I'M YOUR FUCKING GIRLFRIEND AND I WAS RAISED BY AFGHANISTAN!

(Afghanistan) -doing pullups with tree branch- :iconmegaderpplz:

(Me/Vietnam) I could easily slit all three of your throats but I choose not to because you guys are actually smart -Italy bounces around me- Well.... 2/3's..... -takes out fans and slices a bit of Italy's hair off of the top- Better!~
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IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Me/Singapore: Ey, I was raised by Japan, China and the other Asian countries, aru. I think I'm pretty strong, aru >~<
Me/Wales: Yep, and I was raised by England and the Kirkland brothers.
Me/Atlantis: Oy, I'm jour own schwester and I vas raised by jou. I zhink I qualify as 'manpower', ja?
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Me/Trinity/Sirenellia (OC Country): AND I WAS RAISED BY CHINA AND AMERICA!!! THAT MEANS I KNOW KUNG FU AND I'M BADASS! (I'm Chinese born American)!!!
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014   General Artist
'MURICA!
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
I'M THE HEROINE!
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014   General Artist
BOO YA IDIOTAS! (im an American born Polish-Italian-German ^.^)
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I WAS RAISED BY SKIP (Oz) AND KIWI!!!! I CAN SWIM AND.... MISTAKE CANADIAN FILMS FOR HOLLYWOOD MADE ONES!!!
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Darkestdragonwings Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Hesuto: It'ly is a kun(pup).
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was awesome.
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Earthmonkey1992 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Artist
I love it!
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Femicelandhetalia Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'd actually be a great soldier......cuz I'm an artsy jock of course....weird mixture huh?
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Romacat Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
I'd be a terrible soldier but at least I got to kiss Ludwig!
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nalalaboomdeea Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
 I'd be the worst soldier ever xD
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:iconqueenoftheseas:
queenoftheseas Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
You sure love Disney I seriously prefer DreamWorks what made you come up with this:-P
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:iconbritishislesdame:
BritishIslesDame Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
 Disney has changed my life. They were the first to use many advances in animation. I still love DreamWorks. But they aren't classic like Disney. 
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I kinda thought this would be China's.......I fail at life
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Ariel-Leilani Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013

Lol. My internet is kinda slow right now so I was looking at the tab to see what song this would be and I saw "I'll Make A Man Out of You."

 

Me: Ahh LAWD. xD

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transformicerawks11 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Doitsu! Doitsu! I have a bruise!
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AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
I sang the song while reading this.
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itachanlover Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
meh to~~
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:iconqueenofspadesx2:
Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Didn't we all? xD
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Writer
Yup.

(YOU AGAIN OOO:)
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:iconqueenofspadesx2:
Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
You... Have you been following me? xD
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:iconvocaloidhakuyowane:
VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
Nuuuu I swear I didn't follow you it's just we're watching the same thing and--- *Italy-like babbling and apologizes*
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Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Lol, it's fine! I think it's cool that we like the same stuff!
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:iconvocaloidhakuyowane:
VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
XD
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derpyandluna Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
*Is 3/4 through the story*

NEIN! YOU DUMMKOPF!!!

If it were the real me, I'd have warned the Axis. Not try to be a fucking hero. That's Alfred's job!.

WHAT THE HOLY ROMAN FUCK?!

This story is just a tad bit below the "I kinda loved it" on my story meter. 
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Konakona321 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Who listened to the song while reading?
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WestHetalia91 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*raises hand* 
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:iconkonakona321:
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*Pats your head* Yay~
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Feli is acting like a child in this but is still SO ADORABLE *speuals*
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:iconrhinnywolf:
rhinnywolf Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

omfg omfg omfg omfg in my mind that has always been his theme song

 

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RapidashLove Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I loved this so much that I'm watching Mulan right now. :D
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TheBTTownME Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
I was freaking out because i skipped England....then i realized his was the first one i read so i basically had a spaz attack for nothing...but i loved the story it makes me happy....all of them do!
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Kittenergy Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhandspazzplz: How is it you always choose the perfect song and match it to the perfect country?
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animeloverme Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Ludwig I swear if you send me home because you think I'll get hurt again the next thing getting hurt is your bootie cuz I'ma kick it till you get my point
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Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
xD
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animeloverme Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Hehe you know I will. I need a new kicking bag... the other one left.. .-.
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Queenofspadesx2 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Okay then... Just don't tell Feli xD
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:iconanimeloverme:
animeloverme Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Pfft whats he gonna do?
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